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1. | Jun 28, 2014
What a good job you were there to look after her and call an ambulance! I liked your use of sound etcfefs, and you used the ellipsis ( ) really well to build up suspense. I also really liked the use of the word spun' a really powerful verb to show how quickly you turned.Have a look again at this sentence now: I put one of my long hands onto the door when suddenly… Can you think of a better adjective for your hand than long'?
2. | May 5, 2014
There is more than 50km from any city with PD/FD or ambulance. Not a fly wahteer for ambulance helicopter. Why you think nobody call them?And in this situation there is no possibility to help injured 'cause the may have broken bones or neck you rather kill him not help. And i such a temperatire they will be frozen in any way
3. | Jun 10, 2013
Gloomy tales cost clomid treatment learning. (e.g., participate in Demonstrate respect for patients